Okay..here I go...
The neck/chest area skin shading seems inconsistent with the rest of the drawing.. I mean, you showed that there was light shining pretty much directly onto him.. so therefore I think you should have illustrated this by lightening that area.. Also, maybe you could have defined his eyes more or something? They kind of blend in with his epic hair And.. perhaps there should be more clothing folds on the arm of his jacket? Haha I'm bad at explaining myself.. I hope you understand my critique..
Overall, I think it's a great drawing and you drew the hands epicly, and his hair is a really vibrant and nice shade of red, and it catches your eye in the thumbnail. I like the texture effects also.
-cough- I also like the abs <3.
I know there are many things wrong with it but please try to be nice @_@.
mila gustave wrote:
Oh I really like the effect with hair. How it seems to break off. And with those blood drops.
But since criticism is requested:
There are three small complaints. Try holding your fingers like she does.
No matter what I try, I can't do my fingers exactly like she does hers.
For example, there are two bending points at the index finger.
I bend the first point and end up bending the second one as well and no matter what I try, it always ends up bending too.
With the hand of the girl, only the first point bends and the rest goes straight.
Also, the shading on the hair doesn't seem perfect to me. It's good, don't get me wrong.
But it seems wobbly at some points.
And it's not because I zoomed in, I can see it from afar and I'm really fixated on those things in my own drawings.
I know the hair is supposed to be flowy. Drawing it round and not straight and all...
However, to end shadings in the hair 'round' instead of sharp 1px doesn't really feel like flowy and clean to me.
I don't want to push my styles on others, but I would've 'ended the shadings of the hair' with a sharp point.
Overall it's pretty cool. The atmosphere is impressive and there seems to be quite an interesting story behind the character. The moon in the background looks very cool too and that grin looks insanely good. Keep it up!
There's not much to critique here. it's very realistic and the colors are phenomenal.
I feel that you put a lot of effort into the eyes to make them look perfect, but once you got to the nose, you kind of lacked motivation?
It just seems a lot more sketchy and incomplete.
exelent drawing! th line art is wonderful, and i love the shading! but maybe, add some more detail in the background. overall, very good job!
Cute manga do u hav.
Here my drawing again!!!
The middle girl's hips look a little strange because the waist looks bent, and I'm not sure where her left arm/hand is. The girl on the right's right arm looks slightly awkward. I'm also a little confused as to where the sun/light is, because of the shading. Other than that, it's a very nice picture, and it looks like your put a lot of effort into it! I especially love the shading of the hair and eyes. The background looks great aswell!