wow really good! I guess you could try and be a little cleaner? ...wait I'm just being a hypocrite. Honestly you're drawing doesn't need improvement TuT I could never draw that good..
Well here's mine, again~ ;_;
Last edited by Kagemini (28 Nov, 2010 2:34 am)
Ghm, here it comes..
Her eyes are to close to eachother, Learn the anotomy of the human body better, or you can search for poses as a reference..
Don't rely on the fill tool to much, or if you do.. learn how to go along with it, like Ladyofthemirror, She's amazing with just fill tool.
If you're going to use the line tool, make it ook clean, and not to...(how should I explain this..) er.. not to..liney.. I can see that you used the line tool, learn to draw with it cleanly.
The background deserves more effort, Like the people in the background. They look off.. Like...they don't look like humans.
Look out with the snow, it's so much on her...and don't use airbrush to make snow, but the normal brush, and take some Alpha off of it. It makes snow look better..
The Hat.. Is to big.. maybe that was your intention.. but I don't like it..
Her hair.. Looks to messy, that's because of the fill tool.
Anyways I can't say to you that you should change yourstyle.. but yeah.. that was everything.
Random choice of flash drawing.
Ok. DrG.M.E. Here comes my criticism.
The big pumpkin seems a bit 2 dimensional. Try to draw the face around the curves, that makes the pumpkin seem more 3 dimensional. Maybe a bit more shadow to the left would make the pumpkin seem more 3 dimensional. But that's all .
The rest is all very well made up and I like the rest of the colouring and a nice combination of autumn and halloween.
I would personally would've done the green dripping a bit darker with prolly a bit of yellow D:, oh well guess it's personal taste. I hope I wasn't too harsh or hypocritical . say so if I was.
Here's mine 8D
well I know nothing about manga style, but anyways, here goes..
The angle of the chin/neck looks slightly off, and the one frill of the jacket looks a little messy, but other than that it's great!
its hard to critique cartoons because they aren't supposed to be realistic, ummmm maybe make the outlines a bit thicker, but thats just my opinion. maybe some more work on the background? Really love the drawing though!
Last edited by idna (28 Nov, 2010 5:53 pm)
aww that's so cute i love it (: anyway the only thing i'd suggest is to maybe put some hills or something in the background. it looks weird how it's just a straight line between the ground and the sky
well maybe some more shading detail Very cute though!
ooh I just finished this and need some tips for the next one!
ahhhh no picture? =O but u posted yesterday and yesterday was dec 1 and so ill comment on the one u drew on that day =]
i would suggest instead of just outlining the white areas, outline the whole thing? cuz the shoes look a bit unbalanced with outlines on half of it
and uh the white doesnt look very... white? i think u over-shaded a bit =\
eee im not good @ this am i? @_@
but i rlly lyk the background
and im still a newbie so mine are... O_o
heres one of my more favorite ones =\
hope the pictures show ><
oh yay they do
Last edited by beholdpanpan (02 Dec, 2010 8:23 pm)
The raymen pic needs no improvement and the girl is cute i love the eyes but maybe a little more shading on the skin add a little more tone to the hair too
here is my draw:
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i love to hear honest feedback
Nice draw The shading looks a little funny and there are a few flaws. The left eye looks a little strange. And there is random light parts on the drawing (hence: the hair line, and some other parts of the face.) Good job though.
Here's mine... I'm afraid of criticism though I like getting it... =_='
Very good. Just work on hands a bit Anatomy is very good, so is bg.
http://www.ratemydrawings.com/drawings/ … 27119.html