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#561 01 Jan, 2013 7:29 pm

Re: Critique The Drawing Above :D

MollieChristina-, you didn't post your own picture :o

Anyways, please critique my drawing, someone~! u3u

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#562 01 Jan, 2013 8:15 pm

Re: Critique The Drawing Above :D

PassingAlong wrote:

MollieChristina-, you didn't post your own picture yikes

Anyways, please critique my drawing, someone~! u3u

Eeep, sorry:< Herre~ http://www.ratemydrawings.com/drawings/ … 04982.html


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#563 02 Jan, 2013 6:02 am

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Wow! Very pretty! I love how it's b&w :3 critique: the only thing I
would consider is how the nose sort of blends right into her face.

Very nice c:

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#564 10 Jan, 2013 5:15 pm

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No drawing? D:


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#565 11 Jan, 2013 2:15 am

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comment or critique my quick drawing plizz...




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#566 12 Jan, 2013 11:34 pm

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Kdrama lover comment plizzz..


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#567 13 Jan, 2013 7:24 pm

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This is very nice.  You did a good job on details but maybe a bit more shading?  I think some shading on the face would really bring it out more.  smile


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#568 14 Jan, 2013 9:25 am

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Very cute! I love all your details, but you probably should have highlighted the legs a bit more so that they would be noticed, but all in all really cute! 

Well, here's mine...

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#569 14 Jan, 2013 10:36 am

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Neku's middle but of hair should have a black outline like the rest of the drawing. Also the outline is a little bumpy, but still an adorable picture ^u^


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#570 14 Jan, 2013 11:06 am

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The middle girl's hips look a little strange because the waist looks bent, and I'm not sure where her left arm/hand is. The girl on the right's right arm looks slightly awkward. I'm also a little confused as to where the sun/light is, because of the shading. Other than that, it's a very nice picture, and it looks like your put a lot of effort into it! I especially love the shading of the hair and eyes. The background looks great aswell! smile

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#571 17 Jan, 2013 3:52 pm

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Cute manga do u hav.
Here my drawing again!!!

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#572 17 Jan, 2013 5:29 pm

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Umm... No drawing to critique?


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#573 18 Jan, 2013 2:20 am

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Very nice use of actiony-lookingy thing
But maybe a bit of color would look nicer?


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#574 19 Jan, 2013 2:06 am

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Really cool picture! smile

I'm bad at criticising, so i'll do the pro's first.

I love how you did the text. It's very detailed. The way you shaded is cool too.

But I think the eyes are not equal sized, and the ear should almost line up with the eyes.
Overall epic piece of artwork! big_smile


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#575 19 Jan, 2013 5:24 pm

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exelent drawing! th line art is wonderful, and i love the shading! but maybe, add some more detail in the background. overall, very good job!                               

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#576 19 Jan, 2013 5:25 pm

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#577 20 Jan, 2013 3:49 am

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n8oz wrote:

No drawing? D:

I did.. it was the one with the eyes.


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#578 11 Feb, 2013 1:10 am

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bambam07077 wrote:

There's not much to critique here. it's very realistic and the colors are phenomenal.
I feel that you put a lot of effort into the eyes to make them look perfect, but once you got to the nose, you kind of lacked motivation?
It just seems a lot more sketchy and incomplete.

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#579 11 Feb, 2013 6:49 pm

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killinghosts wrote:

here's mine:
http://i.imgur.com/GQWmJZx.png?1

omg!ok XD i'll be yours!haha.ok..*ahem*..erm..seriously..no comment..i like your style big_smile nothing much to say..i love the background ^^ he's really cute

here's mine smile

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#580 06 Mar, 2013 3:12 am

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mila gustave wrote:

killinghosts wrote:

here's mine:
http://i.imgur.com/GQWmJZx.png?1

omg!ok XD i'll be yours!haha.ok..*ahem*..erm..seriously..no comment..i like your style big_smile nothing much to say..i love the background ^^ he's really cute

here's mine smile

Oh I really like the effect with hair. How it seems to break off. And with those blood drops.

But since criticism is requested:
There are three small complaints. Try holding your fingers like she does.
No matter what I try, I can't do my fingers exactly like she does hers.
For example, there are two bending points at the index finger.
I bend the first point and end up bending the second one as well and no matter what I try, it always ends up bending too.
With the hand of the girl, only the first point bends and the rest goes straight.

Also, the shading on the hair doesn't seem perfect to me. It's good, don't get me wrong.
But it seems wobbly at some points.
http://imgur.com/cRc4dvT.png
And it's not because I zoomed in, I can see it from afar and I'm really fixated on those things in my own drawings.

and
http://i.imgur.com/wTdUHh4.png
I know the hair is supposed to be flowy. Drawing it round and not straight and all...
However, to end shadings in the hair 'round' instead of sharp 1px doesn't really feel like flowy and clean to me.
I don't want to push my styles on others, but I would've 'ended the shadings of the hair' with a sharp point.

Overall it's pretty cool. The atmosphere is impressive and there seems to be quite an interesting story behind the character. The moon in the background looks very cool too and that grin looks insanely good. Keep it up!

here's mine:


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