the colours are very rich and pretty maybe the skin needs a little more attention, it just seems a lil unnatural and whats with the weird plant mosters? idc i love them they look cool XD i wish i had brothers like that too ^^
Looks like his feet should be on something but I could be wrong there. shin and eye proportions look a bit off. Could use more shadows for contrast i.e. hair shadow, under arms and legs etc.
I find doing a rough sketch before hand helps me to structure the drawing so I can work out the proportions early on. Like in my Monkey D. Luffy drawing
In other notes the line work looks good, steady hands
Last edited by nahtanojmal (15 Dec, 2010 6:28 am)
The face is a little off, but other than that your work is good. One thing a lot of people taught me on RMD stay away from smudge and airbrush it tends to make the picture to ruff and unrealistic. You have a great picture 5/5
The shading on the pen is really good. What would really make it pop is if you use the brighten and darken tool to give the pen a more metallic feel.
The perspective of the pen is a little off. The "body" of the pen is crooked when compared to the "head." (I hope I explained that right )
The line on the paper is really well drawn. You can see the change in width of the line where the pen was used!
Overall, very good job!
Last edited by Kerly (17 Dec, 2010 7:54 pm)
Looks pro, but I don't like anime style. I like the clean line work and simplistic color scheme, but I hardly see much in the way of original style or personal expression. Other then that, I think you did a great job.
Last edited by styleez (21 Dec, 2010 5:30 pm)
Baha, it took me a while to find something to comment on-because your drawing is so amazing. :]
I would say the eyes could use some shading around them, because they seem 2D-ish in your character's 3D-ish world. And the way he is holding the plaque is slightly awkward, where it looks like he is only gripping it with four fingers and the thumb is just kinda hanging there.
And this is just my preference, but it might help to make the stripes of his scarf follow the wrinkles of the fabric. Unless that was intentional.
Other than that, (Honestly though, I think it's fine the way it is.) It's utterly perfect, and you're amazingly talented.
This drawing kills me, I just KNOW that something is definitely off about her face-but I can never settle on what it is. xD Help, please? I'm fairly happy with her clothes...just everything else...blurgh.
Last edited by Sporkleey (21 Dec, 2010 8:56 pm)
The coloring looks great! I think the problem with the face is that the cheekbones aren't even for the angle her face is at, the one on the right of the picture is a bit too angular and looks like it sticks out in my opinion.
I find sometimes that if I flip the picture horizontally, it makes it easier to see what doesn't look quite right
yay, I got skipped.
Last edited by Kaida (22 Dec, 2010 9:42 pm)
I think the joker can be more detailed, especially the smile, cuz it'll bring his character out more, it's alittle flat though . The parts of makeup that's faded, dirty, crubbled looking parts can be more expressed more~ ^ ^ but overall i think u did great! XD Cuz I'm not a pro at portraits and stuff XD
And Welcome to RMD!!! XD
Last edited by xqwmm (22 Dec, 2010 8:37 pm)