the colours are very rich and pretty maybe the skin needs a little more attention, it just seems a lil unnatural and whats with the weird plant mosters? idc i love them they look cool XD i wish i had brothers like that too ^^

Needs fading on the hair shading (Like on the clothes). Also, put a little bit more detail on the... white fluffy thingies XD. Other than that the colouring is neat ^_^

Looks like his feet should be on something but I could be wrong there. shin and eye  proportions look a bit off. Could use more shadows for contrast i.e. hair shadow, under arms and legs etc.

I find doing a rough sketch before hand helps me to structure the drawing so I can work out the proportions early on. Like in my Monkey D. Luffy drawing

In other notes the line work looks good, steady hands

Last edited by nahtanojmal (15 Dec, 2010 6:28 am)

the top of her head is way way too small. that's all (:

I hate Firefox so much -_-
Um...It's really cool, but...maybe more detail on the hair? And the skin color on the hand should be a little darker. IDK don't kill me
This sucks; I apologize in advance for its many mistakes

The shading on the pen is really good. What would really make it pop is if you use the brighten and darken tool to give the pen a more metallic feel.

The perspective of the pen is a little off. The "body" of the pen is crooked when compared to the "head." (I hope I explained that right )

The line on the paper is really well drawn. You can see the change in width of the line where the pen was used!

Overall, very good job!

Last edited by Kerly (17 Dec, 2010 7:54 pm)

Her foot looks a little smallish. But it has great coloring and shading!

Looks pro, but I don't like anime style. I like the clean line work and simplistic color scheme, but I hardly see much in the way of original style or personal expression. Other then that, I think you did a great job.

 

Last edited by styleez (21 Dec, 2010 5:30 pm)

Baha, it took me a while to find something to comment on-because your drawing is so amazing. :]

I would say the eyes could use some shading around them, because they seem 2D-ish in your character's 3D-ish world. And the way he is holding the plaque is slightly awkward, where it looks like he is only gripping it with four fingers and the thumb is just kinda hanging there.
And this is just my preference, but it might help to make the stripes of his scarf follow the wrinkles of the fabric. Unless that was intentional.
Other than that, (Honestly though, I think it's fine the way it is.) It's utterly perfect, and you're amazingly talented.


This drawing kills me, I just KNOW that something is definitely off about her face-but I can never settle on what it is. xD Help, please? I'm fairly happy with her clothes...just everything else...blurgh.

Last edited by Sporkleey (21 Dec, 2010 8:56 pm)

if you would'nt mind taking a look and giving your feedback to me i would be gratefull thanks im new to this website so nice meeting you all.

Last edited by rocketman28 (22 Dec, 2010 5:18 pm)