I would not like to say more about this, but here is just a draft version on what is and should be drawn!
The details are:
1. To make it more animistic and if cannot, I will gladly accept it!
2. Just add some details on what you feel like to add.
3. The COLORS of the hair:
a. Guy with orange hair should be black.
b. Girl with the pink hair should be black also.
4. There is no need for the title on the top-left of the screen, if you are gonna redraw it wholly. But once again, I will gladly accept any details you will add!
That's all. Thank you! ~
Note: It's for a game I am currently developing and as a thanking will be added to the credentials!
Sorry to be a party-pooper and all, but please be aware of the rules.
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