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#1 21 Nov, 2010 4:31 am

Critique The Drawing Above :D

Everyone wants feedback, right? But why is everyone so afraid to give it?

Here's a thread where you critique the drawing above yours.

RUUUUUUULES
-Be nice when critiquing.
-Actually critique it, don't say "no improvement needed".
-Be honest big_smile
-It has to be one of YOUR drawings!

Okay, sooo I'll begin?

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#2 21 Nov, 2010 5:01 am

Re: Critique The Drawing Above :D

DrG M.E. wrote:

Everyone wants feedback, right? But why is everyone so afraid to give it?

Here's a thread where you critique the drawing above yours.

RUUUUUUULES
-Be nice when critiquing.
-Actually critique it, don't say "no improvement needed".
-Be honest big_smile
-It has to be one of YOUR drawings!

Okay, sooo I'll begin?

I think the lights wrapped around the arms of the tree could use a little shine to them and perhaps add a snowy scenery for the background. But other than that the shading and the tree itself is very nice. smile

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#3 21 Nov, 2010 8:02 am

Re: Critique The Drawing Above :D

I think that you should post a drawing up on this post xD


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#4 21 Nov, 2010 10:28 am

Re: Critique The Drawing Above :D

hmm.. Her eyes look good, but you should work o cleaner lines, and shading. c:

(ehh.. just a drawing right?)


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#5 24 Nov, 2010 9:30 am

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The ears a bit big.. but all else is good, i love the background.


i love to burst out in song at any place in life.
i love to laugh in the middle of an awkward silence.
                       but most of all
                                    i love you. <3

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#6 24 Nov, 2010 10:45 am

Re: Critique The Drawing Above :D

Hmm,, the arm is a little too small...?? Her body parts are a little out of proportion... Eh I don't like criticizing people I feel guilty and I'm not a very good artist ;_; I find the neck a little too big.
It's a nice drawing though, I like the eyes... cool

How do I do this...? I'm new eh dunno how to post a drawing.
Did it work? Sorry if it didn't ;_;


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#7 24 Nov, 2010 3:51 pm

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the eyes are too far apart... one eye is too big and too far up the face from the other one.... her body is smaller than her head ( you need to make the shoulders bigger) the hair n the shadding is nice but it should stand out more or make the outline not stand out soo much ^-^... nice drawing by the way big_smile


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#8 24 Nov, 2010 4:26 pm

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The hand looks a bit weird,but the rest is amazing ;D 

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#9 24 Nov, 2010 4:40 pm

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hmm... the left arm gets bigger in the middle then in the beginning tongue and the right leg is a bit... eh in a interesting angle, looks abit forced tongue othervice i gotta say that that draw is brilliant! expecialy since it got one of my fave colour combinations! black, yellow and red big_smile


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#10 25 Nov, 2010 6:32 pm

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um.... wow.... that's a good picture..... hard to see anything that needs improvement.... i think the nose could use more shading though. it looks kinda non-existant


snakes have no arms that's why they don't wear vests

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#11 26 Nov, 2010 6:06 am

Re: Critique The Drawing Above :D

rennpyt_girl wrote:

the eyes are too far apart... one eye is too big and too far up the face from the other one.... her body is smaller than her head ( you need to make the shoulders bigger) the hair n the shadding is nice but it should stand out more or make the outline not stand out soo much ^-^... nice drawing by the way big_smile

Thank you~ but she's pulling her shoulders up and that's why they're smaller... plus she's in chibi so her heads supposed to be big ^^"

Anyway criticizing genericusername's draw... it's good, but you should work on the details a little bit more, especially the hair and the clothes big_smile You want it to look real don't you?

well here's mine sorry the lineart is really messy =w="


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#12 26 Nov, 2010 7:00 am

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smoother and darker lines, perhaps?


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#13 26 Nov, 2010 4:14 pm

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don't hate me but uh..  it's perfect. i really can't think of anything i'd change >_< and trust me that's rare for me to say


snakes have no arms that's why they don't wear vests

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#14 26 Nov, 2010 5:25 pm

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Hum, I think the shading is nice but you should try to blend it more (it makes her old when you can see all the lines), her lips are too small (well if they were like this in real sorry ^^'), the glasses arent symmetric (I know it's hard but still xD) and again you should blend more the lighting, her right eyebrow is higher than the other one and the hair doesnt look natural (unless she used gel..), her eyes arent symmetric either. One advice would be to use the airbrush or to blend the colors to make it look more natural..Well that's all I found smile


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#15 27 Nov, 2010 11:12 am

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make 4eyes (or whatever that small flying guy is that looks like the snitch from harry potter) more noticable, i didnt see him at first. smile


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#16 27 Nov, 2010 10:55 pm

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Very nice. smile
Just wath out with your transparancy, and very little shading on the snow would have been great.
http://www.ratemydrawings.com/drawings/ … 25285.html
i frgot how to make this picture show.. srry. >_<

Last edited by *Midori_Daisuki* (27 Nov, 2010 10:59 pm)


Just keeping it plain and simple.

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#17 28 Nov, 2010 12:08 am

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I think it's supposed to come across as very sketchy,  some more detail on the pencil to make it look more realistic would be nice and maybe some smudge marks on the paper where stuff as been erased and so on.. 8D

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#18 28 Nov, 2010 5:57 am

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Could work on the details a little more and perhaps try and make the fill tool look more like feathers? It's really cool though yikes

Here's my fail artwork TwT


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#19 28 Nov, 2010 7:05 am

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I think it's really good.  The lighting on the hair is nice. It's hard for me to say that there's anything wrong with it or maybe you could work harder on the background if you wanted.
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#20 28 Nov, 2010 8:24 am

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Smoother lines and more shading on the hair would be an improvment, but it's good smile


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