its cute, but it could use lines, and a shirt maybe
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I commented on ur drawing.
care to critique my most recent drawing, anyone?
thanks! 
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I like it, but it defintely needs a backround! ^_^ That would make it feel more completed. You could also add more detail to the clothes and face. But nice job!
Last edited by storm painter (15 Jul, 2012 11:52 pm)
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wow, u did a wonderful job...hmm...it's kinda hard to say..hmm...her hair on one side is kinda poofier than the other? i guess their should've been a shadow on her chest from her hand..if that made any sense. >.< wow...it's really hard for me to find someting wrong with it..great job. it's cute. 
oh, and i love ur profile pic. Beauty Pop rocks! 
Last edited by Opal1024 (31 Jul, 2012 3:20 pm)
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Maybe add a bit more shadow so we can see their weight and connection to the background, And maybe instead of just going down from the original color, add different colors to make it come to life :DDDDD
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hmm the hand and ear could of been a bit better and the face shape is a bit too curvy (dont know what to say instead XD) the forehead goes out a bit to much but overall very good great job!
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( in my opinion ) Make the strands of hair, that's a part of the bangs, more noticeable 
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Oh, wow! Really awesome drawing, brah The shading is awesome, the lineart is neat, and the girl is adorable :3
Tips: Maybe fix the shading on the hat and the white shirt? The combination of the airbrush and cell shading would look softer if you smudged them together a bit ^--^; The jointing on the fingers look a little awkward(don't worry, drawing hands is always difficult). Only three more tips: the left side of the red bow looks a little miniature compared to the right side, and you can make the left eye more tilted to match the ref. The
right curve of the neck also can be changed to match the ref.
Eh, sorry for the speech lol ^..^;;
Critique Mine, anyone?
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{~Wow! This is really something!
Comments: I really really love how the horse looks as if it is jumping out of the border, it almost makes it look like its coming out to trample me! The overall anatomy looks good, and I love how you made the horse look silky. And I love the almost dreamy look in the horse's eyes. It looks very free! I think a background might have been nice, but I kind of like it without one because of how you made it look like it was jumping out. Such a beautiful horse, love the colors!
Critiques: The outline of the horse looks a little choppy, so maybe smoothing it out would make it look neater. The hair on the left side of the horse's head looks a little odd because of the shading of large brush strokes that don't follow up to the top of its head. 'N Maybe the hind leg on the left that disappeared should go behind the border like the other one.~}
Long Critique is long. 
Last edited by art_attack (13 Oct, 2012 8:34 pm)
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The perspective would have been believable if the portraits were following the perspective rules. The rocks? below the arches doesn't look very nice and 'flat' compared to the floor and the other parts of the image, other then the character.
I do love the way you did the stained glass windows as well as the light that's streaming from it. It's really beautiful and wonderfully done.
I really like that outfit. It's simple and it's elegant as well as fitting for a character of the age. Maybe that sounds.. awkward... But the clothing doesn't play separately from the character and gives a young mature feeling. Wow, I suck at words and English. Basically, love the designs and love the way it compliments the character.
I am a bit iffy on the proportion of the character. Even in anime style, the waist is still either the same width as the head or thicker in comparison to the width of the head. Hands look a little small and awkward to me. Either using a reference or perhaps tilting the scroll a little may help? For me, the hand is floating above the scroll instead of holding it.
But I do love the way you balanced the blues. By repeating the blue you used in the eye on the pendant, the blue for the dress doesn't look very out. Also by repeating the gold on the frames and the decoration for the dress, it creates a pretty nice uniformity. So the images actually compliment each other instead of floating, as many artists tend to do mistakenly.
The small vial of green is really cute.
I love the way the hallway closes in on her. Not claustrophobic but a really nice stable composition is formed as the result. The way you used the light gray instead of the dark does get rid of that claustrophobic-ness, so it's a really nice artistic choice right there.
Overall, great image! Just the proportions and a bit of shadow baffles me, but the overall colors and etc. make that trivial. I really really like how the image doesn't float in layers and that dress. Unnnnnnfffffff
This is the only thing 'recent' that I've actually worked on. So although a little old..;; hope it's okay. u-u;;;
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wow amazing draw art_attack
BTW im a really bad speller so dont judge !!! lol
Comments: fantastic lineart and shading!! it looks wery unique!! The perspective of the drawing is very unique! I am aso in love with the light shinning through the window! exelent job!
Critique: the drawing itself is flawless! Maybe though by adding a bit more depth in the backround it would really make your figure pop!! also, it might be cool to see a bit more texture. But fantastic job! i wouldnt have been able to do a better job! 
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aww man you posted b4 me ok well now ill do one for you paynesgray ... lol
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great drawing!! i would have liked to see a bit more depth in the background. also mayebe in stead of using airbrsh and coloring with low opasity, i would have used stronger colors- but great work
ok for the next person
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Interesting drawing, i say the pose is well done and the eyes sure are pretty, overall i like it, but perhaps as a suggestion you could do a deeper background? still good job 
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Critique for Beefcake619
http://www.ratemydrawings.com/drawings/ … 02105.html
The colour and strike of the lightning is perfect and it gives an amazing atmosphere for the draw. The only thing i would point out is maybe defining the horizon or clouds a little more, really though your talent as an artist is epic so it was hard to find anything to critique.
http://www.ratemydrawings.com/drawings/ … 02105.html
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