Second manga drawing.... Tips? Manga (Original)

I think this is better then my first manga Try. But i stil needs a lot improve! Tips please :)
Created Jun 20, 2009. Unless noted Copyright 2009 Gogoho.

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woenwoen2 Jun 21, 2009

I like it!!! Maybe next time hair, skincolour, you know? But I like your style a lot =D

unos Jun 20, 2009

You're getting better at drawing manga..I agree with shaya..try learning by looking at some reference pics!Keep it up!5/5

shaya17 Jun 20, 2009

I think you are doing very well on your own. I need to copy, so why dont you find a manga picture in a book or something and try to copy it. Then when you have done that a few times try on your own. Good luck :)

NyuuyN Jun 20, 2009

k wait ill translate it netherland xD : moeten doen om de bovenste ooghaar gebogen onderkant, zodat ze laten zien hope u understand now xD (ah and i know on my draw her face is fat bcuz shes half of a chibi ^^)

NyuuyN Jun 20, 2009

hmmm... the nose is good the mouth too maybe u should make not so much eyelashes and the upper eyelashe a little curver then its looks better hope its helps you :D

OLGASA115 Jun 20, 2009

great eyes, i am not good at manga, actually dont know much about this art! 5/5

sweetlove15 Jun 20, 2009

pretty good! sorry im not very good at giving advice

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