this is my first "real" attempt at a drawing on this site so critics rip it to shreds so i can get better
Java Draw Created Jan 27, 2013 640 x 460px Unless noted Copyright 2013 thumper3112.
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but overall, it's a pretty good first draw :D. My first drawing on this site is just... ... depressing OTL
Well, it's only your first time. I prefer feedback over criticism though xD I love the idea with the shadows behind Yukari. Her right arm is a bit thinner and shorter than her other, her hand should be at least about 3/4th the size of her head.
good job :3
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